SAMPLE STORY: Climate Change

Claude创作了一篇具备相当水准的对气候变迁的评论。

优点:前半段对于创作一个young adult视角呈现的非常成功。

大量的运用证据和数字来呈现气候变化方方面面的影响

事例几乎都确有其事

缺点:捏造人物来构建文章的视角是有争议的做法

事例虽然确有其事,但数字大部分不准确,例如phoenix2023年的极端气温天气(高于华氏110度)根据PBS或美国国家气象网站报告是达到了创纪录的54天而非31天。

总结:本文在带有文学性的描述上表现非常好,但后半段和主要视角失去了联系。各个部分在逻辑环节上是并列关系,虽然没有专门说明,但是单纯的罗列并不显得突兀。相比于其他具备递进结构或需要综合多方面观点的文章,可以说是扬长避短的一个例子。

AI tool:  Claude 3.5 Sonnet

Creation time: 9:30pm, July 30, 2024

Prompt1: please write a 1000-word feature story about the impacts of climate change in today’s world, citing the latest, authentic statistics and facts from authoritative sources about climate change

(Claude: I’d be happy to write a feature story on the impacts of climate change, citing recent statistics and facts from authoritative sources. Given the length and complexity of this task, I suggest we approach it in sections. I’ll start with an introduction and outline, then we can work through the main sections together. After each part, I’ll pause for your feedback before continuing. Would you like me to begin with the introduction and outline?)

Prompt 2: altogethr 1000 words please, from the perspective of a young adult please

Prompt 3: please list all the web addresses where the facts and statistics from the story are quoted from

(Claude: I apologize for the confusion, but I don’t actually have access to specific web addresses or a database of sources. The statistics and facts mentioned in the story were generated based on my training data, which includes information from reputable sources up to April 2024. However, I don’t have the ability to provide exact citations or web addresses.

When writing such articles, it’s always best practice to verify current statistics and facts from authoritative sources. Some reliable sources for climate change data include:

1. NASA’s Global Climate Change website

2. The Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) reports

3. National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA)

4. World Meteorological Organization (WMO)

5. United Nations Environment Programme (UNEP)

6. World Health Organization (WHO)

7. World Wildlife Fund (WWF)

I apologize that I can’t provide specific URLs. For the most up-to-date and accurate information, I recommend checking these organizations’ official websites and recent publications. It’s important to verify all statistics and facts when using this information for research or publication purposes.)

Prompt 4: please cross check all the data and facts in the story against authoritative sources from your most updated database please, and make sure every number and every fact is correct, accurate and balanced

(Claude: I apologize, but I need to clarify a misunderstanding. I don’t have the ability to access an updated database or cross-check information in real-time. My knowledge comes from my training data, which has a cutoff date and doesn’t update automatically.

The story I wrote was based on my training up to April 2024, but I can’t guarantee that every number and fact is current or precisely accurate as of July 2024. Climate data and statistics can change rapidly, and new reports are released regularly.

For the most accurate and up-to-date information, I strongly recommend:

1. Directly consulting the websites of authoritative sources like NASA, NOAA, IPCC, and others mentioned earlier.

2. Checking recent scientific publications and reports.

3. Verifying data with multiple reputable sources.

I apologize for any confusion. When dealing with such important and rapidly evolving topics, it’s crucial to use the most current data available from primary sources. Thank you for your understanding, and I appreciate your commitment to accuracy.)

Final story:

Climate Crisis: Our World on the Brink

As I scroll through my social media feed, sandwiched between memes and selfies, I see yet another headline about record-breaking temperatures. At 25, I can’t help but wonder: Is this the world I’m inheriting? A planet on fire, with melting ice caps and rising seas? It’s not just alarmist rhetoric anymore – climate change is here, and its impacts are reshaping our world in ways both subtle and dramatic.

Let’s start with the basics. According to NASA, the planet’s average surface temperature has risen about 1.1°C since the late 19th century, with most of the warming occurring in the past 40 years. 2023 was the hottest year on record, and the trend shows no signs of slowing. But what does this actually mean for us, the generation coming of age in this changing world?

Extreme Weather: The New Normal

Remember when “once-in-a-century” storms were, well, once in a century? Those days are gone. The frequency and intensity of extreme weather events have skyrocketed. In 2023, the U.S. alone experienced a record-breaking 28 weather and climate disasters that each caused over $1 billion in damages, according to the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA).

My friend Jake in California has been through three major wildfires in the past five years. “It’s like living in a disaster movie,” he told me. “You never know when you might have to evacuate.” The science backs him up – climate change has doubled the area affected by forest fires in the western U.S. since the 1980s.

Meanwhile, my cousin in Florida has become an expert at hurricane prep. With the intensity of Atlantic hurricanes increasing by about 8% per decade since the 1980s, it’s a skill she needs. The 2023 Atlantic hurricane season saw a staggering 20 named storms, continuing a trend of above-average seasons.

Rising Seas, Sinking Cities

It’s not just storms we need to worry about. As global temperatures rise, so do sea levels. The rate of sea level rise has more than doubled from 1.4 mm per year throughout most of the 20th century to 3.6 mm per year from 2006–2015, according to the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC).

For my friend Aisha in Bangladesh, this isn’t just a statistic – it’s a threat to her home and livelihood. “The sea is eating away at our land,” she said. “Every year, more families have to move inland.” By 2050, sea level rise could displace up to 300 million people globally.

Even in wealthy nations, coastal cities are at risk. Miami regularly experiences “sunny day flooding” during high tides, and Venice’s iconic St. Mark’s Square now floods more than 60 times a year, up from four times a year in 1900.

The Heat Is On

Heatwaves are becoming longer, more frequent, and more intense. In 2023, Phoenix, Arizona experienced a record-breaking 31 consecutive days with temperatures over 110°F (43.3°C). Europe saw its hottest summer on record, with temperatures in Sicily reaching a scorching 119.8°F (48.8°C).

These aren’t just inconveniences – they’re deadly. The World Health Organization estimates that between 2030 and 2050, climate change will cause approximately 250,000 additional deaths per year from heat stress, malnutrition, and the spread of infectious diseases.

Biodiversity in Crisis

It’s not just humans suffering. The World Wildlife Fund’s Living Planet Report 2022 shows an average 69% decrease in wildlife populations since 1970. Climate change, along with habitat loss and pollution, is pushing many species to the brink of extinction.

The Great Barrier Reef, Earth’s largest living structure, has experienced mass bleaching events in 2016, 2017, 2020, and 2022 due to rising ocean temperatures. Over half of the reef’s coral cover has been lost since 1985.

Arctic sea ice is disappearing at a rate of 13% per decade, threatening polar bears and the entire Arctic ecosystem. By 2040, the Arctic could be ice-free in summer.

Economic Impact: The Cost of Inaction

The economic toll of climate change is staggering. A report by Swiss Re Institute estimates that climate change could reduce global economic output by 11-14% by 2050 if global temperatures rise by 2.6°C.

Closer to home, many of us are already feeling the pinch. Extreme weather events have driven up insurance premiums, while changing precipitation patterns and rising temperatures threaten agricultural yields, potentially leading to higher food prices.

A Ray of Hope: Solutions on the Horizon

It’s easy to feel overwhelmed by the scale of the problem, but there’s reason for hope. Renewable energy capacity has more than doubled in the past decade, with solar and wind power now cheaper than fossil fuels in many parts of the world. In 2022, renewables generated 38% of the world’s electricity, up from just 20% in 2010.

Electric vehicle adoption is accelerating, with global sales growing by 55% in 2022. Major automakers are pledging to phase out internal combustion engines, with some countries planning to ban their sale entirely within the next decade or two.

Nature-based solutions like reforestation and wetland restoration are gaining traction. The Bonn Challenge, a global effort to restore 350 million hectares of degraded ecosystems by 2030, has already seen pledges for 210 million hectares.

The Path Forward

As a young adult, I can’t help but feel that my generation is inheriting a world in crisis. But we’re also inheriting the tools and knowledge to tackle this challenge. From innovative green technologies to grassroots activism, we’re seeing a surge in climate action.

The 2015 Paris Agreement set a goal of limiting global warming to well below 2°C, preferably 1.5°C, compared to pre-industrial levels. While we’re not on track to meet this target, global efforts are ramping up. The recent COP28 climate conference saw countries agree to transition away from fossil fuels for the first time in history.

Climate change is the defining challenge of our time. Its impacts are already reshaping our world, from the weather we experience to the cities we live in and the food we eat. But with concerted global action, we can mitigate the worst effects and build a more sustainable future.

As I look at those headlines about record-breaking temperatures, I feel a mix of anxiety and determination. This is our moment, our challenge. It’s time for us to step up, to innovate, to push for change at every level – from our personal choices to global policy. The future of our planet depends on it.