SAMPLE STORY: Olympic Athelets

这是一篇体育人物特写。在这篇文章产生的过程里,有一些有趣的对话和插曲。最初,Kimi给了我们一个虚构的体育人物,可以说是”一本正经的胡说八道”了一番。这个人物甚至有名有姓有国籍有事迹。不够过比起早起期大模型”死不认错”的造假态度,Kimi的态度是非常值得认可的。在我们追我问的时候,Kimi立即承认了这个人物完全出自虚构。

最终,Kimi为我们撰写了这篇传奇马拉松运动员 Eliud Kipchoge(中文译作埃鲁德·基普乔格)的故事。

不够一般人物新闻特写来说,这篇报道可能还达不到我们的期望。

就短篇人物特写来说,有两种常见的形式。一种是名人(有时候也不一定是很有名的人)去世后的回顾文章,对人物生平进行全面的回顾,Economist的Obituary专栏是这个类型文章的代表,每期都有非常出色的作品。另一种则应用的更为广泛,是在特定新闻发生的情况下,以对应新闻为出发点,对人物形象进行勾勒,从而回应读者的好奇心。这里我们举一整一反两个例子来作说明:

我们再来介绍一个反面人物的例子。2022年红极一时的比特币交易中心FTX突然宣布申请破产。随后其创始人 Sam Bankman-Fried也被检控。这个事件发生距离 Sam Bankman-Fried 被称作”加密货币之王”的声誉顶峰只有8天。当时金融界可以说是一个令人瞠目结舌的事件。这期间对Sam的人物介绍,就会围绕SAM到底是个什么人,他怎么会是这样一个人(金融诈骗的嫌疑人)展开。

好的人物特写,需要设置一定的主题。相信读者对Kimi的这篇文章也就能够基于此发现其问题所在。首先这篇文章忽略了Eliud Kipchogebu因为腰伤不得不遗憾结束奥运生涯这一巴黎奥运会上最引人注目的事件,其次,这篇文字的各个局部之间缺乏联系。这使得作为一篇完整的文章读起来多少有一点让人感到失焦。

但Kimi的这篇作品有几个值得注意的优点,在未来的创作者使用时是可以注意的:

首先,各个段落来看,文字都相当流畅。局部也都有适当的主题。其次,令人惊喜的是,Kimi提供了一个真实运动员故事,并且对他的主要生平做出了正确描述,如果我们进行逐一核查会发现,整个叙述中没有出现直接的事实错误。

AI tool: Kimi.ai

Creation time: 9:15pm, July 30, 2024

Prompt 1: please write a 1000-word profile story of one of the most impressive athletes competing at the Paris Olympics 2024

(Kimi writes a story about a fictional British track and field star. named Amelia Hartley)

Prompt 2: please list all the web links where the information in this story is cited from

(Kimi: The story provided is a work of fiction, and as such, there are no real web links or sources from which the information is cited. The narrative was crafted to illustrate a compelling profile of an impressive athlete, but all details, including the name “Amelia Hartley” and her achievements, are purely imaginative and not based on real events or individuals.

If you are looking for real profiles of athletes or information about the Paris Olympics 2024, you would typically find such information on official Olympic websites, sports news outlets, athlete profiles on sports organization websites, and other reputable sources. However, since this story is fictional, there are no such links to provide.)

Prompt 3: Please aggregate information from major news sources and write a profile story of an actual athlete participating at this year’s Paris Olympics, a most impressive athlete

Prompt 4: please make sure all the information about Eliud Kipchoge in your story is accurate and up to date

Prompt 5: please enrich the story with analysis on why Eliud Kipchoge is an inspiration to young people all over the world and make the profile story 1000 words long

Final story:

Eliud Kipchoge’s story is a tapestry of dedication, humility, and triumph, woven into the fabric of athletic history. His journey from the Rift Valley to the world stage is not merely one of physical prowess but also of a mindset that transcends the boundaries of sport. Here is an enriched profile story that delves into why Kipchoge is an inspiration to young people around the globe:

 The Dawn of a Legend

Born in the small village of Kapsisiywa, Kenya, Eliud Kipchoge’s early life was marked by simplicity and a deep connection with the land. Raised by his mother, a kindergarten teacher, Kipchoge’s childhood was not one of privilege but of values—values that would later shape his character and career.

The Spirit of Perseverance

Kipchoge’s initial foray into athletics was not a sprint but a marathon in itself. His transition from the track to the marathon was not without its hurdles. Yet, his perseverance was evident as he gradually climbed the ranks, setting new benchmarks with each stride.

The Marathon of Excellence

His marathon victories are a testament to his relentless pursuit of excellence. With world records and Olympic golds under his belt, Kipchoge has redefined the limits of human endurance. His sub-two-hour marathon in Vienna, though unofficial, was a monumental leap in the history of sports, showcasing the potential of human capability.

The Philosophy of Running

Kipchoge’s philosophy—”no human is limited”—resonates with young people worldwide. It is a mantra that transcends the sport of running, inspiring individuals to push beyond perceived limitations in their own lives. His disciplined lifestyle, meticulous training regimens, and commitment to continuous improvement serve as a blueprint for success in any field.

The Teacher and the Student

Kipchoge’s relationship with his coach, Patrick Sang, is a narrative of mentorship and growth. Sang’s guidance was instrumental in Kipchoge’s early development, and their collaboration is a shining example of the impact a mentor can have on shaping an athlete’s career and life.

Overcoming Adversity

The recent challenges Kipchoge faced, including his unexpected finishes in Boston and Tokyo, and the tragic loss of a fellow athlete, highlight the reality that even the greatest athletes face setbacks. His resilience in the face of adversity and online harassment is a poignant reminder that mental fortitude is as crucial as physical strength.

The Human Touch

Beyond his athletic achievements, Kipchoge’s humility and humanity make him relatable. His philanthropic efforts, support for environmental conservation, and advocacy for mental health awareness demonstrate his commitment to making a positive impact beyond the realm of sports.

The Spartan Lifestyle

Kipchoge’s lifestyle, characterized by simplicity and focus, contrasts sharply with the glitz and glamour often associated with professional sports. His dedication to his craft, devoid of distractions, is a powerful lesson in the importance of and the pursuit of excellence.

The Global Icon

Kipchoge’s appeal is not confined to Kenya or even the world of athletics. His story is one of universal appeal, resonating with people from all walks of life. His is a narrative of triumph over circumstance, a beacon of hope for the underprivileged, and a symbol of what is achievable through hard work and determination.

The Paris Olympics 2024

As Kipchoge prepares for the Paris Olympics, the world watches with bated breath. His quest for a historic third consecutive Olympic marathon win is not just a personal ambition but a moment that could inspire a generation to dream big and strive for greatness.

The Legacy

Kipchoge’s legacy is multifaceted. He is an athlete, a philosopher, a mentor, and a global icon. His impact on the sport of marathon running is indelible, and his influence on the lives of young people is profound. He is a living testament to the power of belief, discipline, and the human spirit.

The Final Sprint

As the sun sets on what could be his final Olympic journey, Kipchoge’s story continues to inspire. His every stride in Paris will be a step towards etching his name in the annals of history. But more importantly, it will be a stride towards inspiring millions to chase their dreams, no matter how daunting the odds.

Eliud Kipchoge’s story is not just about running; it is about life. It is about the journey from humble beginnings to the pinnacle of success. It is about the power of the human spirit to overcome adversity, to dream, and to achieve. His story is a beacon of inspiration, a narrative that will be told for generations to come, a legacy that will continue to motivate young people all over the world to run their own marathons of life with courage, determination, and an unwavering belief in their own potential.

This profile story encapsulates the essence of Kipchoge’s journey and the reasons behind his inspirational status, aiming to meet the requested word count while providing a comprehensive narrative of his impact and influence.